Pages

Monday, May 24, 2021

On Storytelling: Character Development

Hello!

As a writer, I realized a while back that a helpful tool for quickly identifying the complexity of a character would be a value matrix. However, as I tried to start it, I noticed it was actually quite complicated to make due to the many dimensions and intersections. So since a tool would be too complicated to build, use, and maintain, I decided to share my insights instead.


First off, when developing a character, here are some things to keep in mind

  1. People want to be Happy (even if that means by being sad).

  2. People are complicated.

  3. People have different perspectives.

  4. Everyone has a valid point somewhere in their argument.

  5. When people object, it’s because they see a fundamental human right being violated.

  6. Most people want society to succeed.

  7. People have trouble accurately communicating their values.

  8. Everyone has cognitive dissonance. Very few people have fully thought out their values and the logic behind them.

  9. Conflict is perpetuated because people listen to respond not to understand. This results in people who should be on the same side fighting each other instead. The end goal should be progress, not winning.

  10. People care more about others when their love tanks are filled. In other words, when they receive love and respect.

  11. Respect is crucial and needs to be given regardless of receiving. Respect is how dialogue is maintained, sides are won, and peace is achieved. Check out the conversion story of a KKK leader by Darl Davis, a Black man. This is an important but often overlooked aspect of a character arc.

  12. No one can keep everything in mind.


After that is taken care of, at the root of anyone’s philosophy and values are their answers to two questions. However, keep in mind most people have not yet fully formed their answers.

  1. What is the meaning of life?

  2. What does it mean to be happy?


Now a certain group of people will likely answer these questions with “To know, love, and serve God and be happy with him in the next,” but still don’t know what that means. What we will discover is that their real answer is still forming but is shaped by their prioritization of the following human rights.


  1. Pursuit of Happiness

  2. Be Good

  3. Love

    1. Friends

    2. Family

      1. Marriage

  4. Religion

  5. Growth

    1. Rest

      1. Living Wage

      2. Peace

        1. Security

        2. Justice

          1. Rehabilitation

      3. Job Security

      4. Shelter

        1. Home

      5. Property

    2. Life

      1. Health

        1. Good Nutrition (e.g. Clean water)

        2. Emotions

        3. Exercise

    3. Learn/Education

  6. Contribution to Society

    1. Work

    2. Free Speech

    3. Charity


Something to keep in mind is that these rights indicate the core values of a person. However, their allegiances can impact how they operate and their priority. In addition, it’s good to recognize which levels a person trusts and distrusts. The various levels of allegiance are as follows:


  1. God

  2. Ideology/Philosophy

  3. Religion

  4. National leadership

  5. Political Party

  6. Community

  7. Company

  8. Friends

  9. Family

  10. Self



Similarly, we must recognize that people will place the bar for morals just above what they are doing. This can be to justify an addiction or vice, but something important to recognize is that it can generally be something that they tie to their identity or something they believe they need (hearkening back to human rights). However, to help guide the discussion, it will generally fall under the 7 deadly sins.


  1. Pride

  2. Greed

  3. Lust

  4. Gluttony

  5. Sloth (Not doing what you are supposed to do)

  6. Anger (e.g. Revenge)

  7. Envy (Remember that envy would destroy the object of affection if cannot have it while jealousy just desires it)


Important to this recognition is everything together can result in cognitive dissonance. Some people have not truly and fully thought out their values and ironed out the contradictions. In this case, respect and rapport are more necessary than logic for working through this. To identify these, it’s important to go through an exercise of answering hypothetical situations which bring values into seemingly conflict. One example, “Would you open the border for trade with a nation in the midst of a pandemic?” The answer to this could help show if a person cares more about the economy or life. However, keep in mind that even this is not a 100% accurate test because a person may care about the economy only because they are worried about death and suffering caused by economic collapse more than a disease. This can be even more the case when a nation is in a desperate state to begin with.


I hope that helps everyone with their character development. Now for the twist. This applies to real life as well including yourself. Perhaps going through this exercise can help with creating peace in areas torn due to political blindfolds.


Dream On,
J. D. Nyle

Tuesday, August 18, 2020

Review: Government-Sanctioned Superheroes by Chad Descoteaux

In my previous review of Working-Class Superheroes, I said that there was potential in the sequel to carve out its identity. I believe it succeeded. There are still a few DC references, but there more from Marvel this time around and even a few from Power Rangers. 

Can I say the logic is perfect? No, but it doesn’t need to be, just like the first book. This story shows that this series is more for fun and satire and is enjoyable on that front. While it does occasionally lean into some more contemplative topics, it doesn’t go deep enough to fully unravel the tropes we see in superhero stories. That being said, there were a couple of surprises from some old characters and I thought those were nicely done.

In terms of objectionable content, there was one I didn’t care for and that was Zeke’s mom cheating on her husband. While it was resolved by the end, it didn’t have any of the consequences that were hinted at and treated the affair as okay by all characters who were aware of it. There is also a sex scene with another couple, but it’s not romantically detailed, more an explanation for why a character could get away with something, and it’s a setup for another joke that I didn’t get until I started writing this review.

The last thing that I guess I should mention is there is a lot of usage of c*****r, which I was told is the White equivalent of the n****r though I never knew of any Whites to take offense at it. However, if it does offend you, then beware.

If you listened to the epilogue from Working Class Superheroes, you will notice that it was the start of this book. However, there is extra content in this book’s version of that so I would advise to maybe skip the parts you are already aware of, but not the entire first chapter.

The result? I enjoyed it despite some content objections. I probably wouldn’t let my children read until their late teens, but I personally would like to complete the trilogy. I think this was a step up in terms of storytelling and identity and shows more potential for the series.

Thursday, August 6, 2020

The AuthorGate Dialogues: Rachel Sandell

Hello! Welcome to my first interview with a special guest, Rachel Sandell! A little background for this is that I decided I wanted to try interviewing people as I enjoy learning about them and having conversations. At the same time, I wanted some writing practice so I decided to make a fantasized take on the interview. The Raw Interview has been posted too if you prefer that, but I would like to ask you to take a stab and provide feedback if you like to see more of these kinds of interviews. Thanks and enjoy!
J. D. Nyle

--------

Brrrrrrr! I shivered under my ill-prepared outfit. I had anticipated a hot sandy destination, but instead I was surrounded by snow and ice. A weather forecast system in the AuthorGate would be a handy feature, I noted mentally as I sloshed through the snow, rubbing my arms.
After turning a corner out of the icy valley, I spotted smoke and rejoiced at the signs of civilization. I started to run but tripped over the thick snow. Extremely cold.

As I got into the settlement, I saw everyone wore a blue outfit, similar to Eskimos. A kind old woman saw my clothes were wet from the snow and magically extracted the water from them with some gentle and graceful movements of her arms, like Tai Chi. That felt much better. Then she guided me to a shop. I entered and was amazed. It was a cafe! If only the runny nose would let me inhale that glorious aroma.

I took a seat and the kind old woman ordered a hot drink and a blanket for me. Much relieved, I took a look around. There were bookshelves all along the walls filled with many works. There were comfortable chairs scattered around, some close together and others isolated. In other areas, there were booths where I saw a young woman writing. Looking closely, I recognized her. It was Rachel Sandell, my first interviewee!

“Rachel!” I called. I was immediately hushed by patrons reading books.

She turned and came over.

“J. D.! What a pleasure to see you!”

“Do you work here? Now that I think about it, I recall hearing you were a barista.”

She laughed and replied, “I recently left my barista life behind, actually! Right now, I’m editing a lot more with several great companies, including The Scribe Source, which provides writers with top-quality editing and feedback. I also recently became the managing editor intern at The Daily Fandom, which is basically dreamland for a geek! 

“Eh? Tell me more about those two.” I took a sip of my drink, a glorious cup of hot chocolate.
Rachel motioned for an order and then proceeded to answer, “The Scribe Source provides writers with top-quality editing and feedback. TDF is all about exploring and analyzing fandom-related topics, from comics to film to anime and more, through an academic lens. It’s everything I could have hoped for in a new editorial experience!”

“That sounds awesome! It’s always nice to work in a field you enjoy and that sounds perfect for you just based upon what I see you post on Twitter.” Though thinking back, I had never read anything from TDF. Maybe I should start. “If you had to recommend one article for me to start with, which would it be?”

Rachel smiled and replied, “That’s a great question! There is a wide range of articles to choose from, so I suppose it depends on who I’m suggesting them to. 'Borderlands + Injustice In Avatar: The Last Airbender' is one that would get Avatar fans interested. One of the first articles I read is actually 'Harry Potter: Can You Still Love Your Favorite Series When You Don’t Agree With The Author' which is both relevant and approached from an unbiased angle. New articles are published several times a week, so the content is always fresh and plentiful.”

“Ahhhh. Avatar. I should have realized. We’re currently in the…”

“...Water triiiibe.” she said with a big grin.

“So you like to be a water bender?”

“All four elements are useful in their own ways, water’s emphasis on community and family stands out to me. It’s quite a versatile bending ability, with equal potential for defensive and offensive movements, as well as healing. Or, maybe I just want to be in the same tribe as my favorite Avatar character…”

I leaned in, glancing around, and asked in anticipation, “Who is...?”

I was a bit too loud as I hear some shushes from people reading in the quiet corners of the cafe.

Rachel laughed at my excitement and then answered at a much lower volume than my outburst. “That’s such a tough question! While I think that Zuko’s character arc is the most solid, and that Iroh is easily the wisest, my favorite character has to be Sokka. He is incredibly adaptable; while he originally held some stubborn views early on, he is quick to learn from his mistakes and reshape his mindset when presented with facts. That same ability to learn allows him to keep up with benders, both friend and foe. He can think his way out of tough situations and train himself to be useful whenever he is needed. For a comedic side character, Sokka also has a surprisingly large amount of depth.”

I laughed. “So true on all accounts! Now even though our interview is taking place in this world, I have one major issue with Avatar in the worldbuilding realm.” I placed my mug on the table and gesturing with my left arm on the table asked, “What is your take on this? If a solar eclipse can take away firebending, why not night or being in caves?”

She wasn’t fazed. Instead she simply responded, “The way I understand the magic system in Avatar, each bender is connected to their element. Water benders draw their power from the moon, so when the moon spirit was killed in the season one finale, none of the water-benders could bend at all. It’s different for fire benders and the solar eclipse. It’s a small detail, but in The Day of Black Sun, defiant fire benders, unaware that the eclipse had already begun, try to fight back only to get a comedic little puff of smoke.” She did a small poof gesture with her hands.
“Because the sun isn’t gone completely, just trapped behind the moon, fire-benders can draw from its heat. The problem is that their power is significantly weaker, too weak to even hold a flame for any longer than a moment. At night, after the sun has set, it is still in the sky, just shining over a different part of the world. So, fire-benders have no trouble bending at night, just as water-benders have no trouble bending during the day. They also don’t necessarily need to be able to see the sun to be directly under it to bend (same as water benders don’t need to be directly under the moon), as they are still connected to the heat. So, fire-bending in a cave or any other spot tucked away from sunlight is also fair game. That’s my two cents on the topic! I could be biased, but Avatar’s worldbuilding always seemed very solid to me.”
I picked up my mug again and took a drink, sinking into the chair, “That is a pretty good explanation. Thanks for your input.” I finished my drink as did she and we ordered another round.

As we waited, I took out my notepad and pen and said, “Now it’s time for the author interview. Excuse me as this is my first time doing this. Let’s see… If you could only keep one form of media from books, tv shows, movies, and radio, which would you pick?” I expected her to ponder for a moment, but her reply was quick.
“That’s a tough one, but I would choose books every time. It’s more of a personal preference than anything else, but books just mean a little more to me than any other form of media. TV shows and movies are both fantastic mediums to tell great stories, for sure. But there’s just something special to me about turning a physical page, reading scribbles, and feeling intense emotions, as if you’re really there. I’ve never lost myself in a movie like I’ve lost myself in books.”

“I guess that explains why I see you have so many books on your Goodreads page. You have a lot of books from various genres. What is your favorite thing about books?”

“What continues to amaze me about books is that you can fit an entire world—and sometimes several worlds—within an object small enough to hold in your hands. No matter what genre book it is, there’s always a connection of some sort formed between the author and the reader, and the reader with other readers. Books are one way of sharing experiences, feelings, thoughts, and more with other people, no matter where or when you are. It’s easy to assume that losing yourself in a book can be a way of isolating yourself from the world and other people, but the opposite is true: Immersing yourself in someone else’s story gives you new perspectives on others and even yourself. Considering how valuable these experiences can be, it’s no wonder so many people, including myself, go crazy over books!” She hugged a book tight to her chest as she sighed.

After I finished jotting her answer, I asked the next question. “You appear to be quite active. You work, have a blog, read a lot of books, write reviews, write stories, write poetry, and even beta-read my stories. What is the secret to this high level of activity and productivity?”

Rachel laughed again. “Thank you! I never really realized just how much I do until it’s listed back to me like this! I don’t think there’s any secret to productivity. In the end, it’s all about organization, prioritization, and, most importantly, making time for what you love. My blog, book reviews, poetry, and writing all stem from a passion to create and enjoy stories. Beta-reading for fellow writers is a joy, especially when I get to see those books published! Sometimes, high activity can be overwhelming, but all you really need to do when that happens is step back, take a breath, and reorganize your priorities. It’s also important to remember that you don’t always have to be super productive all day, every day, 365 days a year. Sometimes the most productive thing you do in a day is read a page of your favorite book. Taking a moment to relax and refresh yourself is just as important as flipping your switch to ON and becoming the Energizer Bunny.”

I laughed. “The Energizer Bunny. Hmmm. Just or fun, how would you feel if it came through the doors now? Would it perhaps be a bending master of how to stay energized?”

“Ha! I suppose energy bending is kind of part of the Avatar world already. But I’d love to see certain characters interact with a pink bunny in sunglasses!”

Our order arrived. I could finally smell the sweet aroma of my hot chocolate and see the marshmallows swirl around. Rachel had a Pumpkin Spice latte, which I had often heard was popular. Maybe I should order it too. But first, more questions.

“What was the first story you have published?”


“The very first work I published was a poem called 'Puppet,' and it was in Pacific Lutheran University’s literary magazine, Saxifrage, in, I don’t know, maybe 2017? The year after, I published 'Paper Mache' in the same magazine. Both poems are now free to read on my website, actually. But my first short story was a bit different. I published “The Nightmare” as a sort of experiment in self-publishing and Amazon KDP in 2018 (wow, it’s already been two years!). The story is a retelling of the Hades and Persephone myth from Hades’ perspective, with a few key twists on the Greek tale. I first thought of the idea way back in my community college days, when my creative writing class was discussing retellings and fairy tales, and the inspiration to write hit me like a truck. Fun fact: 'The Nightmare' is actually just one chapter of a larger story that may or may not ever see the light of day.”

I stroked my chin. I recalled when I read the book, that there was a vague feeling it was part of something bigger. That certainly explained it.
“And you have recently published another work, right?”

Her face beamed as she answered, “Just last year, my short story, 'The Boy with Black Eyes,' was featured in JL Anthology The Magic Within, which was a blast! I met a lot of talented writers and even got to interview a couple. 'The Boy with Black Eyes' grew from a prompt for the anthology, and I will say that it’s my favorite published work so far. It’s also the very first time I saw my name and my story printed in a paperback book with many other lovely authors!”
“That sounds awesome. And when can we expect to see more of your stories?”
She brought out a PC and showed me her website.  “I regularly update my website with new poems or flash fiction pieces about once a month. In terms of stories, I have a couple in the works but with no set date of publication as of yet. For now, suffice it to say that I’m always writing and creating, and hopefully some of the stories I’m most proud of will be ready for readers soon!”

“Ah! I know that feeling. I think I’ve had a few stories that I was proud of but always just missing something to say it’s ready to publish. Do you have any tips for dealing with that?”

She thought for a moment, glanced along the room at the various books, and then responded, “I would say that finding and learning from a group of like-minded writers is definitely a step in the right direction. As for the actual writing, you just have to keep at it! Sometimes, a story will need to sit for a while before you realize what it was missing. And sometimes little tweaks over time will gradually shape it into what it needed to be. From past experience, I definitely want to emphasize that you don’t have to be scared to make changes to the story if it just isn’t working. Once I finish my drafts, sometimes I don’t want to revise much for fear I’ll 'ruin' it. But it’s good to make changes for the good of the story, and I don’t regret killing some of my darlings to find the true story beneath.”

“Speaking of writing, you participated in Camp NaNoWriMo, right? Any tips for people who might want to try NaNoWriMo?”

“NaNoWriMo is very fun and can produce a lot of real results! I know of a few writers who thrive in this environment: making goals for themselves, writing a lot every day, and meeting those word counts without a struggle. It isn’t for everyone; in fact, sometimes if I don’t have a set idea waiting to be written or an outline drawn up, my NaNoWriMo experience can be daunting. My best tip is to just have fun with it! Find friends (or make friends!) and join groups to cheer each other on. Reward yourself for every badge you earn and hurdle you clear. NaNoWriMo is about writing and productivity, but mostly it’s about doing what you love.”

Really good advice. Took me a while to confirm I wrote it all down accurately. After that, I said, “All right. Last question. You are a big supporter of the writing community on Twitter. Care to list some of your favorite indie authors?”

She gushed and replied, “Yes, the writing community on Twitter is great to interact with! I discovered some of my favorite authors (indie or otherwise) there, and I’d love to list some. J.D. Nyle, of course, is a blast to beta read for, as the Neostriker short stories are always fun!”

I bowed graciously at the compliment. She continued.
“I enjoy the twists on Greek stories that Nicole Scarano and Adam Wing employ in their books, Pomegranate and Icarus, respectively. Rebecca J. Caffery is also an active member of the writing community, and I’m so excited to note that her debut novel, Cherrington Academy, will be published in August. As one of the beta readers for the book, I can’t wait to hold the published version in my hands! I met Nancy O’Toole Merservier when I asked for indie book recommendations for Indiecember and fell absolutely in love with her superhero series, Red and Black. Timothy Hickson (HelloFutureMe) and Megan Tennant (Cloud Kitten Chronicles) are also wonderful writers, and they both have great YouTube channels as well. It feels so good to gush about the lovely writers out there, and I’m glad to have discovered each one.”
I put my pen down and sank back into my chair with the rest of my drink in my hand, raising a toast. “This was a lot of fun. Thanks so much for answering my questions.”
She simply smiled and said, “I had a lot of fun answering them.” 



Book links

Social media
Goodreads: Rachel Sandell
Facebook: rachelasandell

Interview: Rachel Sandell

Hello! Welcome to my first interview with a special guest, Rachel Sandell! A little background for this is that I decided I wanted to try interviewing people as I enjoy learning about them and having conversations. Another thing that I wanted to try is a different take on interviews. The text below is the raw interview, but I also have a stylized version that I crafted for writing practice. If that catches your interest, please take a look.

And so, here is the interview with the talented Rachel Sandell!

--------------------------

Nyle: You work as a barista, right?

Rachel: I recently left my barista life behind, actually! Right now, I’m editing a lot more with several great companies, including The Scribe Source, which provides writers with top-quality editing and feedback. I also recently became the managing editor intern at The Daily Fandom, which is basically dreamland for a geek! TDF is all about exploring and analyzing fandom-related topics, from comics to film to anime and more, through an academic lens. It’s everything I could have hoped for in a new editorial experience!

Nyle: That sounds awesome. It’s always nice to work in a field you enjoy and that sounds perfect for you just based upon what I see you post on Twitter. If you had to recommend one article from TDF to get people to get on board, which would it be?

Rachel: That’s a great question! There is a wide range of articles to choose from, so I suppose it depends on who I’m suggesting them to. “Borderlands + Injustice In Avatar: The Last Airbender” is one that would get Avatar fans interested. One of the first articles I read is actually “Harry Potter: Can You Still Love Your Favorite Series When You Don’t Agree With The Author” which is both relevant and approached from an unbiased angle. New articles are published several times a week, so the content is always fresh and plentiful.

Nyle: What bender would you like to be?

Rachel: Water triiiibe. Though all four elements are useful in their own ways, water’s emphasis on community and family stands out to me. It’s quite a versatile bending ability, with equal potential for defensive and offensive movements, as well as healing. Or, maybe I just want to be in the same tribe as my favorite Avatar character...

Nyle: Who is...?

A: That’s such a tough question! While I think that Zuko’s character arc is the most solid, and that Iroh is easily the wisest, my favorite character has to be Sokka. He is incredibly adaptable; while he originally held some stubborn views early on, he is quick to learn from his mistakes and reshape his mindset when presented with facts. That same ability to learn allows him to keep up with benders, both friend and foe. He can think his way out of tough situations and train himself to be useful whenever he is needed. For a comedic side character, Sokka also has a surprisingly large amount of depth.

Nyle: So true on all accounts! Now I have one major issue with Avatar in the worldbuilding realm. What is your take on this? If a solar eclipse can take away firebending, why not night or being in caves?

Rachel: The way I understand the magic system in Avatar, each bender is connected to their element. Water benders draw their power from the moon, so when the moon spirit was killed in the season one finale, none of the water-benders could bend at all. It’s different for fire benders and the solar eclipse. It’s a small detail, but in The Day of Black Sun, defiant fire benders, unaware that the eclipse had already begun, try to fight back only to get a comedic little puff of smoke. Because the sun isn’t gone completely, just trapped behind the moon, fire-benders can draw from its heat. The problem is that their power is significantly weaker, too weak to even hold a flame for any longer than a moment. At night, after the sun has set, it is still in the sky, just shining over a different part of the world. So, fire-benders have no trouble bending at night, just as water-benders have no trouble bending during the day. They also don’t necessarily need to be able to see the sun to be directly under it to bend (same as water benders don’t need to be directly under the moon), as they are still connected to the heat. So, fire-bending in a cave or any other spot tucked away from sunlight is also fair game. That’s my two cents on the topic! I could be biased, but Avatar’s worldbuilding always seemed very solid to me.

Nyle: That is a pretty good explanation. Thanks for your thoughts.


Nyle: Looking at your bookshelf, you have a lot of books from various genres. What is your favorite thing about books?

Rachel: What continues to amaze me about books is that you can fit an entire world—and sometimes several worlds—within an object small enough to hold in your hands. No matter what genre book it is, there’s always a connection of some sort formed between the author and the reader, and the reader with other readers. Books are one way of sharing experiences, feelings, thoughts, and more with other people, no matter where or when you are. It’s easy to assume that losing yourself in a book can be a way of isolating yourself from the world and other people, but the opposite is true: Immersing yourself in someone else’s story gives you new perspectives on others and even yourself. Considering how valuable these experiences can be, it’s no wonder so many people, including myself, go crazy over books!

Nyle: So if you could only keep one form of media from books, tv shows, movies, and radio, which would you pick?

Rachel: That’s a tough one, but I would choose books every time. It’s more of a personal preference than anything else, but books just mean a little more to me than any other form of media. TV shows and movies are both fantastic mediums to tell great stories, for sure. But there’s just something special to me about turning a physical page, reading scribbles, and feeling intense emotions, as if you’re really there. I’ve never lost myself in a movie like I’ve lost myself in books.

Nyle: You appear to be quite active. You work, have a blog, read a lot of books, write reviews, write stories, write poetry, and even beta-read my stories. What is the secret to this high level of activity and productivity?

Rachel: Thank you! I never really realized just how much I do until it’s listed back to me like this! I don’t think there’s any secret to productivity. In the end, it’s all about organization, prioritization, and, most importantly, making time for what you love. My blog, book reviews, poetry, and writing all stem from a passion to create and enjoy stories. Beta-reading for fellow writers is a joy, especially when I get to see those books published! Sometimes, high activity can be overwhelming, but all you really need to do when that happens is step back, take a breath, and reorganize your priorities. It’s also important to remember that you don’t always have to be super productive all day, every day, 365 days a year. Sometimes the most productive thing you do in a day is read a page of your favorite book. Taking a moment to relax and refresh yourself is just as important as flipping your switch to ON and going becoming the Energizer Bunny.

Nyle: The Energizer Bunny. Hmmm. Just or fun, how would you feel if it became part of the Avatar? Perhaps as a bending master of how to stay energized? :D

Rachel: Ha! I suppose energy bending is kind of part of the Avatar world already. But I’d love to see certain characters interact with a pink bunny in sunglasses!

Nyle: What was the first story you have published?

Rachel: The very work I published was a poem called “Puppet,” and it was in Pacific Lutheran University’s literary magazine, Saxifrage, in, I don’t know, maybe 2017? The year after, I published “Paper Mache” in the same magazine. Both poems are now free to read on my website, actually. But my first short story was a bit different. I published “The Nightmare” as a sort of experiment in self-publishing and Amazon KDP in 2018 (wow, it’s already been two years!). The story is a retelling of the Hades and Persephone myth from Hades’ perspective, with a few key twists on the Greek tale. I first thought of the idea way back in my community college days, when my creative writing class was discussing retellings and fairy tales, and the inspiration to write hit me like a truck. Fun fact: “The Nightmare” is actually just one chapter of a larger story that may or may not ever see the light of day.

Nyle: I recall having a vague feeling that it was part of something bigger. That certainly explains it. And you have recently published another work, right?

Rachel: Just last year, my short story, “The Boy with Black Eyes,” was featured in JL Anthology The Magic Within, which was a blast! I met a lot of talented writers and even got to interview a couple. “The Boy with Black Eyes” grew from a prompt for the anthology, and I will say that it’s my favorite published work so far. It’s also the very first time I saw my name and my story printed in a paperback book with many other lovely authors!

Nyle: When can we expect to see more of your stories?

Rachel: I regularly update my website with new poems or flash fiction pieces about once a month. In terms of stories, I have a couple in the works but with no set date of publication as of yet. For now, suffice it to say that I’m always writing and creating, and hopefully some of the stories I’m most proud of will be ready for readers soon!

Nyle: I know that feeling. I think I’ve had a few stories that I was proud of but always just missing something to say it’s ready to publish. Do you have any tips for that?

Rachel: I would say that finding and learning from a group of like-minded writers is definitely a step in the right direction. As for the actual writing, you just have to keep at it! Sometimes, a story will need to sit for a while before you realize what it was missing. And sometimes little tweaks over time will gradually shape it into what it needed to be. From past experience, I definitely want to emphasize that you don’t have to be scared to make changes to the story if it just isn’t working. Once I finish my drafts, sometimes I don’t want to revise much for fear I’ll “ruin” it. But it’s good to make changes for the good of the story, and I don’t regret killing some of my darlings to find the true story beneath.

Nyle: You participated in Camp NaNoWriMo, right? Any tips for people who might want to try NaNoWriMo?

Rachel: NaNoWriMo is very fun and can produce a lot of real results! I know of a few writers who thrive in this environment: making goals for themselves, writing a lot every day, and meeting those word counts without a struggle. It isn’t for everyone; in fact, sometimes if I don’t have a set idea waiting to be written or an outline drawn up, my NaNoWriMo experience can be daunting. My best tip is to just have fun with it! Find friends (or make friends!) and join groups to cheer each other on. Reward yourself for every badge you earn and hurdle you clear. NaNoWriMo is about writing and productivity, but mostly it’s about doing what you love.

Nyle: You are a big supporter of the writing community on Twitter. Care to list some of your favorite indie authors?

Rachel: Yes, the writing community on Twitter is great to interact with! I discovered some of my favorite authors (indie or otherwise) there, and I’d love to list some. J.D. Nyle, of course, is a blast to beta read for, as the Neostriker short stories are always fun! I enjoy the twists on Greek stories that Nicole Scarano and Adam Wing employ in their books, Pomegranate and Icarus, respectively. Rebecca J. Caffery is also an active member of the writing community, and I’m so excited to note that her debut novel, Cherrington Academy, will be published in August. As one of the beta readers for the book, I can’t wait to hold the published version in my hands! I met Nancy O’Toole Merservier when I asked for indie book recommendations for Indiecember and fell absolutely in love with her superhero series, Red and Black. Timothy Hickson (HelloFutureMe) and Megan Tennant (Cloud Kitten Chronicles) are also wonderful writers, and they both have great YouTube channels as well. It feels so good to gush about the lovely writers out there, and I’m glad to have discovered each one.

Nyle: This was a lot of fun. Thank you for answering my questions.

Rachel: Thank you for having me!



Book links
The Nightmare: https://www.amazon.com/Nightmare-Short-Story-Rachel-Sandell-ebook/dp/B07JQJ933K/
The Boy with Black Eyes: https://www.amazon.com/Magic-Within-Spellbinding-Anthology-JL/dp/1943171319/

Social media
Website: rachelsandell.com
Twitter: @rachelsandell_
Goodreads: Rachel Sandell
Instagram: rachelsandell_writer
Facebook: rachelasandell

Saturday, August 1, 2020

Review: Working-Class Superheroes by Chad Descoteaux

Note: this review is of the audiobook version

If you read my stories and my tweets, you may get the sense that I enjoy superhero stories. That is true. When I saw a promo for this audiobook, I immediately took action and I'm happy with that. I enjoyed this book as I listened at night before sleep. That enjoyment is how I rate and so my rating is 4 out of 5. Please keep in mind that is my rating as you may otherwise think differently based upon my analysis.

This book is a hard one for me to review. While I enjoyed it, it's hard to describe why. The first reason is the lack of identity this book has due to two parts.

One, there are many stories that parody or play on the DC heroes, even from DC and Amazon. I have not consumed any of those stories besides the Flashpoint animated movie so I am not bored of that subject. However, I could expect others who have may not care for another one.

Second, the references and allusions to the DC heroes are constant that if you know the DC universe, it's hard to ignore. That being said, that's part of the fun of the story. There's even a reference of the potential romance of Batman and Wonder Woman from the Justice League cartoons. In addition, I'd posit the epilogue shows great potential for carving an identity and that makes me excited for a sequel.

There are a few choices the author made that I like. One is to name the chapters issues. It's cosmetic but I liked it. Another thing was the shift from Kryptonite to Uranium. While it doesn't fix all of the issues I have with Kryptonite, it's a nice usage of real-world. Of course, it's also a setup for some jokes that become more obvious when listening to the audiobook. If I was reading, I might have missed it.

The performance is actually another reason why we are constantly reminded about the DC universe. The reader emulates the voices of famous performances. It's actually pretty good for a few. It did take me a while to get into the performance, but I don't know if it's due to my lack of experience with audiobooks, the actual performance, or the text. I believe though that it was solid after that.

For the plot, while it's not original to see how our would be if Superman was corrupt, I was impressed by how the plot worked overall, even if there were a few scenes that did not make sense to me. In terms of execution, I would say it counts as original enough, especially with the couple of Marvel influences that were thrown in. Again, I enjoyed it.

In terms of characters, they are certainly reasonable takes on people who bear their respective powers. My main dislike is Zeke as Wombat since he goes a bit overboard on his fight on crime, but until then I enjoyed his sections. The Flash-equivalent may not be the most loveable take, but at least he gets better towards the end. And his unknowing relationship with Zeke can be interesting material for a sequel.

There is action, as you may expect in a comic-inspired book, but I felt more compelled by the other scenes such as the infiltration, poker night, etc. There were a few cases where I felt like I missed something critical in the action sequences but due to the format of the audiobook, felt less compelled to backtrack.

So to whom would I recommend this to? That is tough to say. My guess would be people who don't mind a light-heart take on the DC heroes. I don't think the book takes itself too seriously so those who are able to hold that mindset and like superhero stories would enjoy this. Now, if you would excuse me, I need to get to the sequel.


Author: Chad Descoteaux

Sunday, May 31, 2020

Book Review: The Pale Rose

Cozy mysteries are a comfort for me. One that I use to practice my Japanese is Detective Conan, which follows a similar premise of a character whom no one expects to be the real detective. What I like about the Pale Rose is that it's an already married couple and the "detective" is decently competent.

Okay, there are exceptions to that claim, similar to many mystery shows. When the real brain appears, everyone else acts less competent. It happens here too but it's okay as there is at least one occasion where he makes up for it.

The married couple dynamic is nice and surprisingly refreshing. There is simple married life banter with no romance to distract from the mystery. That is good because all the clues needed to solve the case are given to the reader. Don't worry about this being an indie title. I only found one sentence that "agitated" me and it was unrelated to the clues. As for me, I didn't solve it despite picking up on the clues but the explanation ties all loose ends and provides that satisfying perspective change.

I enjoyed the story and look forward to reading more. Though one thing I would like to see is if the detective pair can reach the level where they don't have to lie to solve the case.

Check it out on Amazon
https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/1475167237 

Saturday, May 30, 2020

Book Review: Sapphire Eruption

As part of Indie April, I had picked up the Sapphire Eruption. The cover was really alluring and the premise interesting. So how is it? Here is my review

As of the time of writing, my rating would be 7 out of 10. If the issues I raise get resolved, then it can easily be an 8 or 9. I did enjoy reading it after getting past a few of early tropes. And I look forward to learning what happens next.

To start off, is this the next Avatar: the Last Airbender? I think having that comparison would only serve to disappoint. This story is good on its own and that is good enough for me.

For me, the story doesn't start until about chapter 7, after we get over a few tropes, retreading, and meeting the first companion. However, past that it's full speed ahead for multiple ships.

The many characters are fully realized and have their own motives, personalities, and story. The book is long, but packed with these parallel character-driven threads. This makes the world feel deep and complex and is great. At the same time, it's also one of the areas that requires extra work from the reader to mine the gem of the story.

There are at least 11 point-of-views we hop around in the story. Sometimes this head-hopping happens mid-paragraph, but it also happens mid-sentence. It’s not tied to point of views too. Sometimes the general subject changes with no warning, resulting in having to re-read the same paragraph to sort things out.

While most point-of-views are isolated in chapters with a maximum of maybe 3, the structuring can shift to a parallel thread right at the climax of another arc and with so many stories going on, I didn’t know when I could expect to finish the arc. At least once I learned the chapter I was reading was unrelated to the previous chapter after almost finishing it.

There are other areas that could use some polishing. In addition to grammar mistakes and typos, there is also a bit of repetition of information. Sometimes this occurs with adjacent paragraphs. The times where it occurs in separate chapters is more forgivable as it serves as a reminder, which might be nice if you read the book only a few chapters at a time, which is my recommendation.

In terms of objectionable content, there was one f-bomb which disappointed me because the author did such a great job avoiding it in the rest of the book. Curses that we see were built from the world. Other times we are simply told the person is cursing and it’s fine. The other piece that really sits in my mind is how the one woman who is described as ugly is disrespected and used for “laughs”. While it’s realistic and treated fairly minor, it still left a bad taste for me, perhaps mostly because there is only one woman called out as unattractive.

Putting those issues aside, again I found the overall story good. There is a gem inside and if it didn’t require the extra work to enjoy it, I would have given this 4 stars out of 5. As an indie book, I think this serves as a benefit because the book can be edited to deal with the issues I’ve mentioned. In addition, when the next book comes out, it might be easier to decide if the ending of this book is a cliffhanger or not. Either way, I look forward to continuing to read this series.